With them the seed of Wisdom did I sow, | |
And with mine own hand wrought to make it grow; | |
And this was all the Harvest that I reap'd-- | |
I came like Water, and like Wind I go. |
How cruel is fate to keep one from another
each wishing for nothing more than eachother
but time has taken its toll
till now they are separate for the better
To me she is the most beautiful story
the little girl who's name is Zoe
this next year she'll age some more
and then she'll be the most beautiful poetry
Her eyes are large and brown
hair so beautiful it is her crown
no woman's style could ever match hers
all she does is beauty, even her frown
So those were my attempts at writing poetry, I hope you liked them.
5 comments:
"all she does is beauty, even her frown"
that's sweet, I like
Even though I'm sitting right next to you and I told you that I like yours, I'm going to post it on here too. I like your poem!
I agree with John. I love it! The line where you say "and then she will be the most beautiful poetry" I think, is very original.
I like your poems. On a side note could you add an e to the end of my name. Diane, please. Sorry it bugs me
I loved how you insinuated that time compacts and reshapes story into poetry. I think you should write another stanza explaining how this happens.
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